http://onlinetoeflcourse.com/ Interested in becoming one of Michael's STEALTH students of the One and Only 7-Step System to Pass The TOEFL Test? Click on the link to become one of Michael's students. The sooner you click, the faster you will achieve 26 and 24 points on the speaking and writing sections of the TOEFL iBT. In Michael's Online TOEFL Course, you can also practice until you can score 22 on the reading and listening sections of the exam. ===================================== In this set of materials, the reading passage discusses that fast food restaurants contribute negatively to the health, and the listening passage, during which it presents opposite points, discusses that the fast food restaurants contribute positively to the health. First of all, the lecture opposes that the long term effects of obseity are a result of the food, as the reading passage suggests. Although fast food restaurant chains provide cheap food, the long term effects of obesity are a result of the food, according to the author in the reading passage. However, according to the lecture, there is no scientific evidence to show that Calories and obesity have a direct relationship. For example, although they absorb calories, they don't go to exercise, so it leads to obesity. (misrepresenting information) Second of all, the reading passage presents a point that fast food also contributes to an unhealthy society that is plagued with cholesterol, diabetes and heart disease, whereas the listening passage claims that fast food restaurants also make the healthy food for people, for example, providing apples and other fruits for children and also have the more options for other people. Last but not least, the lecture opposes that idea about gluttony, as the reading passage claims that fast food restaurants encourage gluttony. In fact, according to the listening passage, people can decide how much soda and food they wish to consume. And the most important thing is to control the fast food's conception. In conclusion, after having read the reading passage and listened to the lecture, it is apparent that there is no evidence to show that fast food will lead to obesity, unhealthy society and gluttony.
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